Alabama S.A. — revisão do inglês de alabamasa.pt e versão francesa (amostra)

Amostra preparada pela Alvuo Labs a partir do texto público de alabamasa.pt (consultado a 13-11-2026). O site só existe em inglês, e é esse texto que uma marca estrangeira lê quando procura uma fábrica para private label. Abaixo: 8 correções e as páginas Home e About Us revistas em inglês, com um excerto em francês.

1. Correções ao texto atual (atual → corrigido)

#Texto atualProposta corrigidaPorquê
1Worldwide — We work with costumers in all corners of the world.Worldwide — We work with customers all over the world."Costumer" é quem faz guarda-roupa de teatro e cinema. O termo certo é "customer".
2Specialized on the techniques of assembled, strobbel and stitching to sole.We specialise in cemented, Strobel and stitched-sole constructions."Assembled" não é o nome de uma técnica (em inglês diz-se "cemented") e a grafia correta é "Strobel".
3Present at international footwear fairs, Alabama show the Private collections.Alabama presents its own collections at international footwear fairs.Falta concordância ("shows") e "the Private collections" não se percebe.
4All our products are the target of several construction stages and strict quality controls.Every pair goes through several production stages and strict quality checks."Target" quer dizer alvo. Aqui o sentido é "passar por".
5We think we have room for progression, we accept new challenges…We are always looking to improve, we welcome new challenges…"We think we have room for progression" soa a falta de confiança, logo numa página comercial.
6Oriented to international market, Alabama has in its structure and in its genesis…Export-oriented from the start, Alabama has always worked with international brands.É um decalque do português ("na sua estrutura e na sua génese"). Falta também o artigo: "the international market".
7has over 30 years… / has approximately 30 years in the production…has been making women’s and men’s footwear for more than 30 years.A mesma página diz "over" e "approximately". E "has 30 years in" é um decalque de "tem 30 anos de".
8Newest Collections — SS21 · FW20Newest collections — SS27 · FW26 (ou retirar as datas)As coleções "mais recentes" são de 2020-2021, o que faz um comprador pensar que o site está abandonado.

2. Textos revistos

Home (EN)

High-quality shoes, made for you.

Handcrafted — Quality footwear, made by hand.

Worldwide — We work with customers all over the world.

Leather Working Group — We work only with certified tanneries.

Higg Index — We measure our social and environmental performance.

About Alabama S.A. (EN)

From our own brand to private label collections.

Based in Vizela, in northern Portugal, Alabama – Indústria de Calçado, S.A. has been making women’s and men’s footwear for more than 30 years.

Alabama presents its own collections at international footwear fairs. Our success rests on continuous investment in technology, people and new ideas.

Export-oriented from the start, Alabama has always worked with international brands.

The basis of our success: flexibility and dynamism. We specialise in cemented, Strobel and stitched-sole constructions, and every pair goes through several production stages and strict quality checks.

We are always looking to improve, we welcome new challenges and we respond to every customer’s needs.

À propos d’Alabama S.A. (FR — excerto)

De notre propre marque aux collections en private label.

Implantée à Vizela, dans le nord du Portugal, Alabama – Indústria de Calçado, S.A. fabrique des chaussures pour femme et pour homme depuis plus de 30 ans.

Tournée vers l’export depuis ses débuts, Alabama a toujours travaillé avec des marques internationales. Nous sommes spécialisés dans le montage collé, le montage Strobel et la semelle cousue, et chaque paire passe par plusieurs étapes de fabrication et des contrôles qualité rigoureux.

Proposta: revisão completa do inglês de alabamasa.pt (Home, About Us, Products, Contact, nomes das coleções e menus) e versão francesa das mesmas páginas. 250 EUR, preço fechado, entrega em 3 dias úteis, texto organizado página a página, pronto a colar no WordPress.